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Yeah Ben is going to be an ongoing gag from now on.. I'll try and improve the gags to be a little more funnier not saying this is particularly bad but according to that scene it seemed to generic and that I could've done a little better.

Speaking of gags, I've recently been double checking the comic for any moments that might've been "funny" and so far from a scale 1 to 10. I'd say it's a 5. I mean there were some moments that I did find funny like that page back in Chapter One where Ben threw the salt at Emily and Paul just to get their attention but compared to the rest they's not bad in general but could use a little more effort.

- Nathaniel, E