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Cousin Neil

Something that I've changed in this page's dialogue is that Neil used say something about his family leaving him behind to "protect" him from his father's past and was repaliced with this text instead- "It's alright Alex I know my mom has done some things that might've upset your dad back then but's okay, it's all in the past plus I've moved out from my parent's house so yea.. things have changed" now I don't know exactly what was the previous dialogue before this edited version but all I know is that it was a plotline that was going to be explored more about how Neil's dad was an interpol agent and that something his dad did in the past is back to get him although it would have been a great plot to explore later on in the webcomic but some of it didn't make any sense and it was too complicated and difficult to work with.

Days later I would come back and edit those pages dialogue that mentioned anything about Neil's dad. It wasn't that hard considering that it was on alot of the pages. As of now Neil's dad's occupation is still yet to be thought of but it will be something that I will work on as the story progress.

- Nathaniel, E